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The Lonliest Dog in Outer Space 1
submitted 2 years ago * by [deleted] from self.whatever
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[–][deleted] 2 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 2 fun - 2 years ago (4 children)
u/Jasoncarswell what do you think? I know you weren't really hyped on the idea but I think it has promise.
[–]JasonCarswellMental Orgy 2 insightful - 3 fun2 insightful - 2 fun3 insightful - 2 fun3 insightful - 3 fun - 2 years ago (3 children)
Check for typos. Looks like a good album cover from a great album.
I'm subversive but not a child so I don't think I'm your target audience. As an animator and adult I used to enjoy all things animation. That was well over 20 years ago. I've moved into several other life-phases. This is not my cup of tea.
[–][deleted] 2 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 2 fun - 2 years ago (2 children)
Check for typos
I used google lens to transcribe it from my sketch book, I thought I had got them all.
I'm subversive but not a child so I don't think I'm your target audience
So what you're really saying is it's the best thing you've ever read and you aren't really surprised though because just about everything I write is brilliant?
The image in the background is a subway.
[–]JasonCarswellMental Orgy 2 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 2 fun - 2 years ago (1 child)
Firstly you should know is Regis.
IFIFY: Firstly you should know my name is Regis.
Plus there is awkward grammar and/or missing punctuation.
The story is boring. The vocabulary is boring. The character is boring. You even posted it in /s/whatever instead of /s/Writing - boring.
Get a good story. Then we can talk about the illustrations.
[–][deleted] 2 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 2 fun - 2 years ago (0 children)
I appreciate the critique.
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