NBA Store Refuses to Sell ‘Free Hong Kong’ Jersey, But Does Sell ‘Kill Cops’ Jersey
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[–]Questionable 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun - 3 years ago (1 child)
Right. So I will do it for you. I will teach you common sense. A conclusive statement is a statement you make. The conclusive statement you have made as written states, that you believe that the NBA Store Refuses to Sell ‘Free Hong Kong’ Jersey, But Does Sell ‘Kill Cops’ Jersey. Then it goes on to add, "Fuck you liars".
As written, "Fuck you liars" is a supporting statement, to your earlier affirmation that the article as written is correct. A non punctuated quote at the begging of your conclusion, muddles the narrative, and causes the reader to think less of you.
Instead of what you have written, you should have truncated it to read, "Conclusion: Fuck you liars." This brief comment is not a true conclusion. Though it is poignant.
In conclusion, a conclusive statement is a summary of your comments, drawing on the main points of your argument, or in this case review of the article in question.
[–]TruthTeller 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun - 3 years ago (0 children)
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