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[–][deleted] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (4 children)

Why does my story have to have a point?

[–]Caamib[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (3 children)

Ok, I just don't really get it.

[–][deleted] 1 insightful - 2 fun1 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 2 fun -  (2 children)

The jailbait thing reminded me of it. Oh maybe it makes more sense if you know the kid is gay. He's talking about being fucked in the ass. The story doesn't really have a point, your thing just reminded me of it.

[–]Caamib[S] 2 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 2 fun -  (1 child)

Yeah, I did think the kid is gay but thought there was more of a point to the story.

[–][deleted] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

I'll try harder next time.