Pretty good except for the implication that poor women and men should unite in class interest against the common enemy. That's pure marxist fantasy, what makes women and men enemies isn't some cultural conspiracy, it's biology. Men are biologically programmed to dominate and abuse women and have acted according to that programming long since globohomo capitalism emerged, long before our species even evolved into homo sapiens. Poor men are not poor women's comrades, they are statistically significantly more likely to beat, rape and kill their women than wealthier men and none of them have any intention of letting "their" women be their equals. Socialism is as much of a male supremacist ideology as everything else. Most poor women will always submit to "their" men to be abused and nothing will ever change and blackpilled women will be left as minority who see how hopeless things truly are.