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Too many words

[–]madcow-5 2 insightful - 3 fun2 insightful - 2 fun3 insightful - 3 fun -  (1 child)

Doesn't make sense to me. It feels like English isn't the first language of whoever made it.

[–]JasonCarswell[S] 1 insightful - 2 fun1 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 2 fun -  (0 children)

Re-write it with brevity and humour and I'll redo it.

[–]JasonCarswell[S] 1 insightful - 2 fun1 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 2 fun -  (0 children)

Re-write it with brevity and humour and I'll redo it.

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    [–]JasonCarswell[S] 1 insightful - 2 fun1 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 2 fun -  (0 children)

    Re-write it with brevity and humour and I'll redo it.