I wrote a standup bit about jews.

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[–]Alphix 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (1 child)

That last bit, it needs a complete rework, something like...

"question" "answer": because of what your people have done, since time immemorial up to the present day, that is, turning your back on your own god! <-- This sentence puts the hard-hitting part dead last where it belongs, giving it the punch to be a worthy punchline.

[–]LarrySwinger2[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

Well, the joke is that I promised to stop talking about the jews but then I do it anyway, that's why "the jews" is the punchline. I was going for something like this bit from Seinfeld.