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[–]RaptorInMotion[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (3 children)

Whatever you say :)

[–]Chipit 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (2 children)

Seriously, you're speaking into an empty hole. Nobody will read or understand anything you say until you learn how humans communicate with each other, and change your style of writing to match it.

[–]RaptorInMotion[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (1 child)

Hmm, you havent read the first paragraph it seems, or read the book i linked.

shrug

[–]Chipit 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

People aren't going to read a whole book! Jesus! Especially not if it's like your first paragraph! I can't really make out what it's supposed to be about, and if you can't hook a reader in the first paragraph you've got no hope. Seriously - online course in effective communication. Please take one.