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[–]Chipit 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (6 children)

Too much bold; didn't read.

[–]RaptorInMotion[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (5 children)

Yea the text formatting on here is not great unfortunately :(

[–]Chipit 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (4 children)

It's not the text formatting. It's the overuse of bold, the overuse of NOTE:, the overuse of slashes, the overuse of braces, and the general incomprehensibility of your post. You might have had something to say in there, but I'll never know what it was.

You really need to take an online course in communication. You have good ideas but you are terrible at communicating them to other people. You need to be able to persuade them to your point of view, and this post does none of that. For example:

-------------------------------------Igigi-----------------------------------

Shamgaz also known as: Samyaza, leader of his rebel "civ/cult/clan" at Mount Hermon

And their offspring/avatars/forms =

And their lands = "far east, lands of high mountains" [CHINA/RUSSIA?]

And its offshoots = {Scythians?}

I have no idea what this means, and I'm not hammering my way through the whole post to find out. Nope. You want people to listen, you create things they can understand.

[–]RaptorInMotion[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (3 children)

Whatever you say :)

[–]Chipit 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (2 children)

Seriously, you're speaking into an empty hole. Nobody will read or understand anything you say until you learn how humans communicate with each other, and change your style of writing to match it.

[–]RaptorInMotion[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (1 child)

Hmm, you havent read the first paragraph it seems, or read the book i linked.

shrug

[–]Chipit 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

People aren't going to read a whole book! Jesus! Especially not if it's like your first paragraph! I can't really make out what it's supposed to be about, and if you can't hook a reader in the first paragraph you've got no hope. Seriously - online course in effective communication. Please take one.