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[–]OPStolen 3 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 0 fun4 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

I'm already a 7 times published poet. I have poetry publications in New York, Nevada, and Tennessee. But we incels dont function in society and just sit in our parent's basements doing nothing. "Accomplish something and the women will come". You know how many women I've told I'm a published writer to and they've just said "Oh that's nice, anyway about what I was saying". If women don't care, then it means absolutely nothing.

[–]TaseAFeminist4Jesus 2 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 0 fun3 insightful - 1 fun -  (3 children)

He swallowed hard and wiped his brow

His heart beat like a drum

Rehearsed his act

Just one more time

And thought about his mum

For 12 long weeks of Calculus

He'd sat behind this elf

Her pony tail, her gentle smell

Her comfort in herself

Now homework done

Exams all passed

He did what he had planned

She laughed at him in disbelief

Made reference to his hand

[–]greybeard 2 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 0 fun3 insightful - 1 fun -  (2 children)

nice

[–]TaseAFeminist4Jesus 2 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 0 fun3 insightful - 1 fun -  (1 child)

Glad someone read it.

[–]greybeard 2 insightful - 1 fun2 insightful - 0 fun3 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

I often put long posts in my bookmarks and only get to replying way later. It's hard out there for attentionspancels

[–]greybeard 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

I like the idea and hope to get around to posting a poem (to main feed) someday, but I'm not very creative