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[–]bellatrixbells[S] 9 insightful - 1 fun9 insightful - 0 fun10 insightful - 1 fun -  (2 children)

Thank you so much for giving me this input ! I'm a literary student and aspiring author, so the tendency to go overboard is definitely sort of a "flaw" of mine in a get to the point context. That was definitely useful and I will work on it keeping those things in mind when doing so. Thank you very much again ! ❤️

[–]haveanicedaytoo💗💜💙 5 insightful - 1 fun5 insightful - 0 fun6 insightful - 1 fun -  (1 child)

Welcome! After you re-write it, I can look at it again if you want. But a warning, I'm very blunt and nit-picky and will most likely be like "Make it shorter!" no matter how short it already is.

[–]bellatrixbells[S] 2 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 1 fun3 insightful - 2 fun -  (0 children)

Hahah oh no ! I'll try to Sum it up in one sentence like "trans are taking over pride, Do something !"