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[–]fuckingsealions 10 insightful - 6 fun10 insightful - 5 fun11 insightful - 6 fun -  (3 children)

What in the ever loving Crossdresser in the Rye stream-of-consciousness shit is this

[–]Skipdip[S] 4 insightful - 2 fun4 insightful - 1 fun5 insightful - 2 fun -  (2 children)

Thank you, I tried ... it’s supposed to be from their perspective. Yes I realize it’s poorly formatted and fully confusing. It’s hard Edit long stuff on a phone.

[–]slushpilot 4 insightful - 1 fun4 insightful - 0 fun5 insightful - 1 fun -  (1 child)

I picked up on it. I like it.

Needs an extra pinch of cognitive dissonance though.

[–]Skipdip[S] 1 insightful - 1 fun1 insightful - 0 fun2 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

How so? Please do tell. It’s a work in progress.