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[–]Sun_bear 5 insightful - 2 fun5 insightful - 1 fun6 insightful - 2 fun -  (0 children)

That you for your poems! If you want to share poetry that you love, go ahead and do it! Don't let anyone tell you your interests are boring or whatever - the constant pressure of women to be self-depreciating is a tool of the patriarchy!

[–]WinoRhino[S] 5 insightful - 1 fun5 insightful - 0 fun6 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

Fourth poem entitled: When Lying Beside You

When lying beside you

It is strange, and away from reality

I am surrounded by flowers

and you are all that nature is.

[–]WinoRhino[S] 4 insightful - 1 fun4 insightful - 0 fun5 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

I think I may have posted that one... so here goes the next. It is called "I am so happy with you" (I am starting to think poems take there titles from the first line, but you never know)

I am so happy with you

I can discuss all my thoughts, or

I don't have to say anything

You always understand.

I am so relaxed with you

I don't need to pretend

I don't need to look good

You accept me for what I am

I am so strong with you

I depend on you for love

But I live my own life

You give me extra confidence to succeed.

[–]WinoRhino[S] 4 insightful - 1 fun4 insightful - 0 fun5 insightful - 1 fun -  (0 children)

Okay, here goes an ant eater, no I mean another It is titled, "Today we Celebrated"

Thunder, Lightening

sun is gone; clouds are red

ground is fed

Clouds disappear

land is dry

rainbow sky (editors comment: Is this an Iron Maiden song? Anyways)

Today we celebrated

the birthday of our love.

We rode our motorcycle

down an old dirt road

on the side of a still pure lake.

The clouds touched our heads

on the long bumpy cliff.

Twenty miles away from life

we stopped.

Seven years ago we met.

Six years ago we loved And now, still, we love more

our bodies met

outside in the sand.

Theair sent a chill

to wake us

from our fantasy.

US

the sun

the lake

the sand

FOREVER.