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  • BsS Draft1 = BsS: Vomit Draft, Act 1A
  • BsS Draft2 = BsS: Vomit Draft, Act 1B
  • BsS Draft3 = BsS: Vomit Draft, Act 2A
  • BsS Draft4 = BsS: Vomit Draft, Act 2B
  • BsS Draft5 = BsS: Vomit Draft, Act 3A
  • BsS Draft6 = BsS: Vomit Draft, Act 3B
  • BsS Draft7 = BsS: Breakdowns & Backstories
  • BsS Draft8 = BsS: Who/What is vHOPE?
  • BsS Draft9 = BsS: -

  • GaP Draft1 = GaP: Origin Story
  • GaP Draft2 = GaP: -
  • GaP Draft3 = G.O: GaP: -
  • GaP Draft4 = T101: PProd - Pre-Series Short
  • GaP Draft5 = G.O: T101 Pre-Series Short Review & Discussion
  • GaP Draft6 = T101: PProd - Overarching Content Structure
  • GaP Draft7 = G.O: T101 PProd Overarching Content Review
  • GaP Draft8 = G.O: BsS 1A Reviews + 1B Anticipations
  • GaP Draft9 = G.O: BsS 1B Reviews + 2A Anticipations

DRAFT #7 = Bittersweet Seeds: Breakdowns & Backstories

BITTERSWEET SEEDS - Breakdowns & Backstories

Plot breakdowns, character arcs, and character backstories.

For the /s/BittersweetSeeds project.

First posted: 2019-06-xx   |   Last update: 2019-06-xx


BsS - Plot Breakdown

This deconstructive study might better be started by referencing the following (that will be summarized after the Vomit and/or First Drafts):

  • Bittersweet Seeds: Story Summary Variations, with SPOILERS
    • Bittersweet Seeds: Logline / Elevator Pitch - 1 or 2 LINE plot summary
    • Bittersweet Seeds: Outline - 1 or 2 PARAGRAPH plot summary
    • Bittersweet Seeds: Synopsis - 1 or 2 PAGE plot summary
    • Bittersweet Seeds: Treatment - ~10 PAGE long form summary
    • Bittersweet Seeds: Novelette - detailed short story or novel, not in screenplay format
    • Bittersweet Seeds: Feature Screenplay / Movie Script - 90 to 120 PAGES = 90 to 120 minutes




BsS - Character Arcs

For the Vomit Draft I'm going to just worry about the main protagonist and his arcs through the whole story. I'll worry about everyone else in minor Vomit Draft revisions and subsequent versions. This means before the Vomit Draft starts I'll map out his arcs here.

BsS - Ernest Achbar, main protagonist




See: Who/What is vHOPE?, wiki draft.


BsS - Other Characters' Arcs

ERNEST - main protagonist
CELINE - Ernest's wife
CELESTE - Ernest & Celine's daughter



BsS - Character Backstories



BsS - Feedback

The /s/BittersweetSeeds subsaidit and its posts are locked, for publishing only, and they'll be updated over time.

Please freely join in on this dedicated /s/GlossedOver open discussion, and specifically about this "BsS Breakdowns And Backstories" give feedback with [comments and reviews here](▶▶▶_ADD LINK HERE_◀◀◀).

I welcome all constructive criticism. This first pass will have issues with it. Some I may already know about with ready solutions, some need working out, some I know still need resolving but don't yet know how, and I'm guessing there are some issues I haven't even considered. Thanks in advance, and I apologize in advance if I don't get a response to you sooner than later.

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