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[–]birdpoem[S] 3 insightful - 3 fun3 insightful - 2 fun4 insightful - 3 fun -  (2 children)

🧐🤔

[–]hennaojichan 1 insightful - 3 fun1 insightful - 2 fun2 insightful - 3 fun -  (1 child)

😮 Glad you like it? You should seriously talk to a publisher about your work. If it pleases me, it will please others. Also, it is different. If you don't know him just do a search for Ogden Nash. His poems are somewhat similar. For example:

             Kind of an Ode to Duty

http://www.harrellland.net/documents/sixth/duty1.pdf

Shortened versions exist.

or

       Reflexions on Ice-Breaking

Candy

is dandy

But liquor

is quicker

[–]birdpoem[S] 3 insightful - 2 fun3 insightful - 1 fun4 insightful - 2 fun -  (0 children)

Thank you! Much appreciated. I just enjoy it for fun. Publishers and all that official stuff makes me very nervous and takes the joy out of it (for me). But, your compliment still made my day 😀 Have a happy day today!